The Battle Surrendered
Part Two
Storyteller SilverLoom
The next thing I knew, I was blinking as if I had just
woken up and saw that I was no longer in my bedroom.
The eerie
light was gone. The shadow creatures were gone. I was completely alone in a
dark, damp prison. The only light in the place filtered in from a crack far above
me. Someone had chained my ankles and wrists to the stone floor of the dungeon.
I had a vague memory of the creatures telling me to chain myself up.
Now I realized
just how dumb I had been to follow the shadow creatures. “Hello?” I called. No
answer except for the constant dripping of water from a corner of my prison.
“Hey! Let me go! Get me out of here!” I yelled. Was it my imagination, or did I
hear malicious laughter coming from the darker parts of the dungeon?
My heart
pounded with fear. I had never thought something like this could happen to me.
This sort of thing only happened to people in books. It wasn’t supposed to
happen in real life.
A scream
welled up inside of me and I let it go, along with a torrent of tears. The
worst part of it was that I knew I had put myself in this place; that I hadn’t
fought hard enough.
I curled up on
the cold stone floor and sobbed. Then I called for the only One who could hear
me. “God, please… please help me! I don’t know where I am! I shouldn’t have
given in. Please! Help me!”
As my tears
fell afresh, the light from the crack in the wall suddenly disappeared. I
stopped mid-sob and froze. I even held my breath.
A voice
reverberated off the solid walls of my prison. “Hello, down there!”
I looked up at
the crack. The face of a man stared back at me, his head almost completely
covering the crack. He had the widest smile I had ever seen. “Not the most
comfortable place to live, I’d say,” he remarked in a friendly manner.
I wiped my teary
eyes with my pajama sleeve. “Can… can you get me out?” I stammered. I felt
reluctant to trust this guy, afraid this was another trap.
His smile grew
even larger. “That’s what I came here to do; to help you out." His face drew back from the hole
as he stood.
I waited while
he hacked away at the stone, making the crack large enough for him to crawl
through. It was a few minutes before I realized that he was using his sword to
send the bricks of my prison tumbling down. That was one strong blade.
Finally, he
secured a rope outside the dungeon and used it to climb down through the gap he
had made. He looked like a prince out of a fairy tale; dressed from head to toe
in white stitched with gold thread, a voluminous cape thrown over his
shoulders.
When he stood
in front of me, I lifted my shackled wrists up and said wistfully, “I’m chained.
I don’t know where the key is.”
8 comments:
Oh, I love where this is going Storyteller. Thank you for sharing.
Wow, great story. I love the imagination that you put into your writing, it flows smoothly. I encourage you to keep up the great work!
I am really curious where this will go.....I like it so far, but this prince fellow strikes me as one not to trust. I would warn the lass!
Thanks, guys! I'm so glad you are liking it!!!
Millard, just wait and see... ;)
Hahaha! That's what I thought, too, Millard! :)
Great job, ST! :)
Thanks, Watcher. :)
's all better, now. =) No bugs that I can tell.
Praise God! Thank you for telling me, Celeb! AB and I worked it out to the best of our ability this afternoon.
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